i'm writing a story!

I'm writing a story called "The Dawn of Time" and it's really sad sometimes. :( But I put 9 in a half chapters on my other blog. I've been working really hard on my writing, and I read writing tips sometimes. It's kind of going to be a romance story. oh, and it will have 25 chapters for your information. maybe if i feel like it i'll write a second. what's your opinion on it? It's at www. harperwrites.blogspot.com